being inside a shell for years,
Rafe Monduwan obtains extra patience:
No yelling,
No fists pounding.
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when the day comes,
Rafe sees his friend Benjiamin Langer Preton,
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Manhood anxiety in Lexington.
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from being absolutely single and alone,
to a boarding school gamer in town,
Rafe values what a friend of the same sex can offer,
Yet he is ready to face odds from some dark corner.
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a story on an ordinary lad,
an experience Bill Kinigsberg wishing to lead.
while inspired,
also tired...
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ReplyDeleteeither outside or inside of box, we all face challenges.
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