Thursday, February 5, 2015

my five plus senses

with eyes i can see,
hands i can touch,
I visualize the ocean
and touch the sky.
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with nose I can smell
and ears I can hear,
i eat lots of marshmallow
and listen to orchestra music loud and clear.
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with tongue i can taste
and sixth sense I can feel,
I digest food deep, no waste
and prevent wars, and feel well.



a lyric for young readers, enjoy...shared with

 Hyde Park Poetry

20 comments:

  1. this is superb for young kids to read aloud and have fun.

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  2. a tribute to our abilities. Well said.

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  3. so well written ...full of imagery -tasty...enjoyable

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  4. Interesting poem, thanks for sharing at Hyde Park. Like rotten fruit my mouth water and my stomach turn :)

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  5. five sense is good to speak to us today, which is great.

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  6. http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2015/02/hyde-park-thursday-poets-rally-week-80.html

    an award, thanks.

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