Thursday, February 5, 2015

my five plus senses

with eyes i can see,
hands i can touch,
I visualize the ocean
and touch the sky.
.
with nose I can smell
and ears I can hear,
i eat lots of marshmallow
and listen to orchestra music loud and clear.
.
with tongue i can taste
and sixth sense I can feel,
I digest food deep, no waste
and prevent wars, and feel well.



a lyric for young readers, enjoy...shared with

 Hyde Park Poetry
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20 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 5, 2015 at 8:03 AM

    this is superb for young kids to read aloud and have fun.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2015 at 11:48 AM

    nice.

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  3. relFebruary 7, 2015 at 5:48 AM

    a tribute to our abilities. Well said.

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2015 at 6:45 PM

    well put.

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  5. Anjum Wasim DarFebruary 8, 2015 at 10:44 PM

    so well written ...full of imagery -tasty...enjoyable

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2015 at 7:49 AM

    a fun and playful verse.

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2015 at 8:59 AM

    some people like simple and real things.

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  8. eleanor and josephFebruary 9, 2015 at 9:00 AM

    lovely word flow.

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  9. Abbey Michael Boyle Blount FallinFebruary 10, 2015 at 8:10 AM

    a cool nursery rhyme.

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  10. Lotie Bollag Mosher Kloppenburg Romney February 10, 2015 at 6:42 PM

    awesome write.

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  11. Malia Craig Tagg Lawrence PageFebruary 10, 2015 at 7:22 PM

    beautiful.

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  12. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2015 at 9:31 AM

    five sense do help us become human.

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  13. Kora-Leah Meet Faust WilsonFebruary 11, 2015 at 9:32 AM

    impressive.

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  14. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2015 at 10:38 AM

    Interesting poem, thanks for sharing at Hyde Park. Like rotten fruit my mouth water and my stomach turn :)

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  15. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 12, 2015 at 6:59 AM

    awesome....

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  16. mary bruce leopold holm reedFebruary 12, 2015 at 7:00 AM

    five sense is good to speak to us today, which is great.

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  17. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2015 at 9:44 AM

    profound.

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  18. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2015 at 11:07 AM

    way to go.

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  19. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2015 at 8:04 AM

    love it.

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  20. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonFebruary 20, 2015 at 6:11 PM

    http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2015/02/hyde-park-thursday-poets-rally-week-80.html

    an award, thanks.

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